Scruffy's Video now live - Need feedback
by Scruffy Lefty
on Nov 24, 2008 5:11 PM PST
And the embed is broken - Well go check it out and let me know what you think. And remember I had limitations :)
Its called The Flag and I co wrote, Filmed and edited the video. And yes that is my brother playing Turtlz.
Thats the direct URL - If you want to check out the page you can goto. www.norton.com/gamer
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Very cool.
“I froze.”
Good conceit. My wife liked the tear.
by John Morgan on Nov 24, 2008 6:05 PM PST 0 recs
First I thought you meant to write Concept
Then I realized conceit was a word. Then I looked up and thought “Hey I’m proud of myself but I don’t think that showed in the video” Then I looked at the second definition and realized you meant metaphor.
To reiterate. I’m tired
You may gain some yards on the ground, but eventually Lofa will end up biting you in the ass.
by Scruffy Lefty on
Nov 24, 2008 6:29 PM PST
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Yeah, conceit like organizing idea
The parallel between freezing under pressure and freezing because your virus scan starts is well done.
by John Morgan on
Nov 25, 2008 9:41 AM PST
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I watched it without sound. I didn't get it, surprise surprise.
I’ll rewatch it later.
by LantermanC on Nov 24, 2008 8:13 PM PST 0 recs
Haha, I thought it was hilarious.
Makes a lot more sense with sound. Good editing, good acting.
by LantermanC on
Nov 25, 2008 6:45 PM PST
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And youtube link
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wMOUi3vTMDo
You may gain some yards on the ground, but eventually Lofa will end up biting you in the ass.
by Scruffy Lefty on Nov 25, 2008 10:20 AM PST 0 recs
I fixed that for you
You have to hand code the embedding.
by John Morgan on
Nov 25, 2008 12:09 PM PST
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That's hilarious.
Best quote: “I play by my own rules. I wasn’t going in no freakin sewer. I took the road.”
by SeaTownBlueDevil on
Nov 25, 2008 1:30 PM PST
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good stuff
I’d say you hit your target demographic pretty squarely.
by Nate Dogg on Nov 25, 2008 10:20 PM PST 0 recs
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